jon told me about this site so i've decided to give my haiku writing a break and try to write something to fit the restrictions given. it was really tough to make the lines exactly 30 letters, including spaces and punctuation. it was a nice challenge though. tell me what you think before i submit this to their site. i really want to be published.
resist falling in love because
ugly monsters will breath life
in your heart, mind, and soul,
leaving you paralyzed forever.
3 comments:
I thought that was fantastic! Really, except that "breath" is the noun, not the verb breathe.
Regardless, I thought it was beautiful.
aww fuck. so i guess this one will still be a work in progress.
But I still really like it!
Post a Comment